Friday, 1 May 2020

The Dewy Fence

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  1. Robyn Shaw4 May 2020 at 08:03

    Hi Phoebe,
    What a beautiful photo. Did you take it? I love misty days-all those secrets hiding. Is that your hill poking its nose out? I wonder if it would be easier to read your writing if you changed the colour? Have a go.
    Thank you for sharing your excellent diamante poem and photo.
    Mrs Shaw

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  2. Mrs Bennett4 May 2020 at 16:23

    Hi Phoebe
    I have always enjoyed writing Diamante poems and I think your poem and photo are an excellent example!
    I love mornings when the blanket of mist lifts to unveil a beautiful day. Did the sun eventually come out once the mist had lifted or did it linger all day?
    Mrs Bennett

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    1. Unknown8 May 2020 at 10:55

      Hi Mrs Bennett,
      The sun did come out after the misty morning.
      From Phoebe

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  3. Anonymous5 May 2020 at 10:57

    Hi Phoebe
    awsome poem it seems like you have descibed a dewy morning on the farm to perfection,greeat job
    Liam Schwartz from Kokatahi school hokitika.

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    1. Anonymous22 May 2020 at 10:04

      Hi Liam,
      Do you have frosts Hokitika? We have lots of frosts here in Matawai. I like it when the frosts go crunch under my feet. Do you?
      From Phoebe

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  4. Mrs Fisher7 May 2020 at 17:06

    Hello Phoebe
    I love the photo of a misty morning at Wairata that you have captured for the background to your excellent poem.
    If you had not included a photo, the words you chose would have created a vivid picture in my mind as I read it. Looking forward to reading more of your wonderful writing Phoebe.
    Mrs Fisher

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  5. Unknown8 May 2020 at 10:51

    Hi Mrs Fisher,
    Thank you
    We have had a couple of dewy mornings.
    From Phoebe

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